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By: kink

kink — Fri, 05 Jun 2009 21:07:37 +0000

Heh. It’s a goofy book about teenage superheroes. It kinda caters to a niche crowd.

And, I’m still trying to find my writing feet again after being away from the game for a while, so the “Enjoy?” is a little of my uncertainty and unease bleeding through.

By: Derrick

Derrick — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 16:27:26 +0000

Okay…I have to ask…why in the world do you think somebody in their right mind wouldn’t want to read this?

By: Serial Prizes » Blog Archive » Breakfast Serial x.02

Serial Prizes » Blog Archive » Breakfast Serial x.02 — Tue, 28 Apr 2009 04:40:11 +0000

[...] x-posted “Curse these ponderous appendages,” the five hundred pound brain in a translucent, semi-permeable, semi-human casing bemoaned, as he began waddling up the bleachers. The LCD screen stretched across his “chest” read: “>_<”. [...]

By: kink

kink — Sun, 26 Apr 2009 18:12:12 +0000

@Maria

The cast is huge, for sure. There are nine main students (five boys, four girls; all of whom have been introduced, one of whom has yet to be properly named), nine adversaries (four of whom you’ve met), a handful of faculty members (only one of whom has been introduced), and a couple other incidental characters (none of whom have appeared yet). At the end of the day, we’re probably looking at a cast of 25, easy.

But, don’t fret. Differentiating the cast is one of my top priorities going forward. A supplemental visual guide is also in the works.

Thanks for reading!

By: Maria

Maria — Sun, 26 Apr 2009 04:48:39 +0000

Hi, I was referred to this story by my friend Moe. I liked your story, except for not really being able to follow the action due to the overwhelming number of characters. I almost did up a flowchart to try and keep track of everyone.

By: Tom Moses

Tom Moses — Sun, 26 Apr 2009 04:10:54 +0000

Some awesome dialogue in there man, I laughed, and I laughed some more!