Anyway, thanks for the kind words, man. Cortex is, obviously, a blast to write. Those emote signs can be a bit frustrating, though. I thought there’d be more variety for the type I chose (which, I guess, are the manga-y flavor or whatever), but it seems all the variety’s reserved for the sideways emoticons. Ah well. Too late to change now.

AFTA Black, yeah. AFTA for Academy for the Advanced. Black ’cause their suits are black. Just kinda fit. AFTA Noir sounded a little too outre.

Heheh. God, I hope no little kid tries to find the lyrics to the Magic School Bus theme and gets scarred for life.

Are Wireframe and Cortex meant for each other? We’ll see…

I didn’t know the “Assassins Do It from Behind” shirt actually existed. I’ll have to get one.

Yeah, the multi-person combat scenes were a bit confusing, even though I tried to pare the respective teams down into manageable chunks. More quick-cutting between scenes may have been the ticket there. I’ll try that next time.

I also totally dropped the ball on metaphoring the action up. Bah.

AFTA Black sounds really cool for ANY squad.

Get a bit of a Scholastic’s Magic School Bus vibe from the description of the thing sprouting wings and thrusting off. Don’t know if that’s good or bad.

Ah ha ha ha, touché, sir.

I already <3 Wireframe and Cortex. OTP!

I think I have Monkeybrain’s tee.

Overall pretty good, though, I’d say combat with such a large ensemble got a little muddled here and there. Don’t really know how to fix that either, except, maybe, break them up in the scenes or between scenes a little more. Make it more of a one-on-one thing.

Loving the non-conventional ensembles we have playing here.